Cold Burning Hearts
Рассказ, Подростки и молодежь, Роман
Cold Burning Hearts
Рассказ, Подростки и молодежь, Роман
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Muhammad Kumayl
Chapter 37
Please write the next chapter
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2020-04-20 11:49:12
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Ąrabella Blue
Chapter 1
The plot is too rushed, so much so that we miss getting to know the lead character. Cliche best friend hotter than though is a lot too much especially when it's not clear how they came to be friends and *all those many things she helps with* 🤨. There should be some play by play before we are rushed into the first meet cute, seriously, which leads to show that the writer will be trying way to hard to fill the last chapters of the book. ENGLISH HAS RULES...Goodness, every sentence has been horribly grammatical tragic. This is where I stop.
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2020-05-23 17:42:43
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Meriliis Kivimägi
Very good! And interesting by different people perspectives... Excited to read new chapter. Hope it will come soon.
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2020-05-26 23:52:00
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