Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 5
The next day

Cops found the dead body of Morkel. They started investigating the case. The only clue they got about the suspect was, the security camera footages from outside the supermarket. The footage was also useless, the car didn't had a numberplate and the drivers face was not clear. The cops where confused about where to start.

In Ron's house

Janet asked Ron Why did you transferred such a huge amount to my bank account.

Ron replied It's just a precaution. You will know it later.

Janet said Okay. Now, what about Dana ?

Ron replied We need to make a fail proof plan to bring her down.

Janet told I got some info about her. She is a daily visitor of Casino bar. We can catch her from there.

Ron replied No. The bar is flooded with people and we can't do anything to her.
But we should meet her today.

Janet said Okay.

Night 22:01

Ron and Janet goes to the bar. They saw Dana was sitting in the bar counter. Ron goes towards Dana and offered her a drink.
Dana smiled looking at Ron and thanked him.

Dana asked        Do you think you can impress a girl like me by just offering a drink ?

Ron replied        Do you think I'm a jerk to think so ?

Ron kept thousand dollars in front of her and told her      I need cocaine.

Dana replied        I think you misunderstood me. I'm not a drug dealer, I'm a tattoo artist.

Ron said        Ohh, sorry. Do you mind if  I  come to your shop for a tattoo ? ...... By the way where is your shop ?

Dana told her shops address and told Ron You can come there at any time between the working hours.

The next day, Morning

Ron and Janet goes to the tattoo shop. They were wearing a hudi to cover their identity. They came to the tattoo shop in the same black car.
They goes inside the tattoo shop. Dana was all alone. Ron introduced Janet to Dana as his girl friend.

Ron told Dana I need a quote to be tattooed on my neck. Can you pass me a paper ? I'll write the quote for you.

Dana gave paper to Ron.

Ron took a pen and wrote Why did you killed Jessica ? Do you know Morkel ? For whom do you work ?

Ron gave the paper to Dana.
Dana was shocked after reading it.

Ron told her Give me the answers before Janet pulls the trigger.

Dana replied I know Morkel. But I don't know what you are talking about.

Janet closed the door and told Dana You will answer now.
Dana quickly tries to open the drawer, Janet kicks on the drawer and Dana's fingers got stuck. Dana started screaming with pain.

Dana told them I'll tell..... I'll tell. I don't know for whom I work. All I do is I goes to Klenton Infotech and gives a card to the CEO.

Ron asked What card ?

Dana replied It's kept in the drawer.

Janet moved her foot.
Dana took the card and gave to Ron.
Dana was searching for a cloth to cover her wound.

Ron said Dana, take this cloth.

When she turned around Janet shoots her.
Ron and Janet leaves the shop.

Mr. Francis Markela, a FBI  agent, came to investigate the murder of Dana. Cops came to the conclusion that the murder of Morkel and Dana are linked yo each other because of the presence of the black car with no number plate.
Mr. Francis ordered the cops to be more active during the  rush hours of the city.

The next day

Ron and Janet were talking about the visiting card which Dana gave to them. It was not a visiting card, but the card belong to Mr. MacKaye.

Ron told   "We need to play a treasure hunt game with him."

Janet asked    "What do you mean?"

Ron replied    "A game."

Ron sent a greeting card to MacKaye by keeping the card ,which they received from Dana, inside it.

Ron wrote   "You know what thins card mean. Meet me today at 12:00am near the warehouse behind the old broken church. If you won't show up there.....
Next day News hour will be discussing about the relationship between a business magnet and a drug dealer."

After reading the letter Mr. MacKaye decided to go to the warehouse with his two friends Jeffrey (a drug dealer) and Romero.

Time 12:05am
MacKaye and his friends reached the warehouse. He saw a greeting card placed above a barrel.
He opened it and read
"You came here with your friends. That's okay. Now you need to choose a gate from the three in front of you. One will lead you to me and the rest will lead you to death."

Janet was observing their movements from a distance. MacKaye decided to go  inside gate number 1. Jeffrey and Romero were going in gate number 2 and 3 respectively.
Janet told Ron that MacKaye is going in gate number 1.

As MacKaye moved forward, He saw a girl in front of him.

MacKaye said    "So a girl.... You were threatening a man."

Janet replied     "So you think... A girl like me can't kick the butt of a**holes like you."

MacKaye said     "Pity on your life. Brave girl with no future."

Ron said from behind    "Yes MacKaye , You are right. She is a brave girl."

MacKaye asked     "So what you got for me ?"

Ron replied     "A bullet "

Janet shoots MacKaye from behind.

Jeffrey rushed towards gate number 1, after hearing the gunshot sound.

Jeffrey looking at the two indistinct people      "Who are you?"

Ron replied    "I'm no one.... But I know you. You were Dana's boyfriend, Right?"

Jeffrey replied     "Yes... I was. But where's MacKaye ? "

Janet replied      "You will meet him, within a minute."

Ron asked    "Why did you, Morkel, Dana, Robert and MacKaye killed Jessica ?"

Jeffrey replied   "Ohh... That girl. I didn't kill her. That's not my kind of business"

Janet asked   "Then whose ?"

Jeffrey replied    "Why the hell should I tell you."

Ron pointed the gun on Jeffrey and said     "Now you may tell us"

Jeffrey moved away from the gun and said    "Take it easy..... I'll tell you. It was Steffen. He is the mastermind behind that girl's murder."

Janet asked      "So you were not  involved ?"

Jeffrey replied      "Yes...Yes... I wasn't. I didn't do anything."

Ron shoots Jeffrey, but missed.
Jeffrey pushed Janet over Ron and ran away. Ron and Janet followed him, but they missed.



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книга «Carried by the wind».
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It's good so far. Maybe you could add more detail on places or people to make your readers feel like they can actually seeing what's happening. Just a thought.
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